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The Mighty Rush

My head is pounding with so many thought's 
I have to find a way to get them out without a doubt.
My Visions are running round and round with aloud sound, where am I?
I must catch up before they leave me, before they are stolen by someone else.
They are mine they are in my head I must bring them to life Now.

I feel      I feel   


THE MIGHTY RUSH!

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John Heck

October 18, 2008 at 10:40 AM

Cathy - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John

Michael Jordan

October 15, 2008 at 6:24 PM

Cathy - Sometimes its hard for the pen to keep up with the mind - congrats on having this poem featured this week - God Bless

Sue Mason

October 14, 2008 at 7:16 PM

LOL awesome with this one Cathy ... sometimes it feels like another entity is writing and I just hold the pen ... smile ... great feature here. Congratulations!!

Daver Austin

October 14, 2008 at 5:19 AM

I had to read this one several times, which is good......To get feelings out without a doubt? Yes, but doubt usually comes later. Can one really have any unique sensations or ideas? You pose good questions. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Carrie Richards

October 13, 2008 at 6:54 PM

I think we all often get the mighty rush to put down our words as they flow! congratulations on your work being featured. Such a worthy poem! ~ Carrie

October 13, 2008 at 5:14 PM

I like the active nature of this poem. I can relate to wanting to catch up with my ideas and get them on paper before I forget them. Nice reflection on writing. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Karen