' the Midst of the Crowd '

in the midst of the crowd,
i can feel myself;
feel myself doing what ?
giving up, but

this feeling is a first
and deep down it 
hurts cause i know its the devil 
and its beyond my level

my level for what ?
my level of control ; 
i just wish reality had 
a pause button, so
i could put life on
hold ;

in the crowd,
I can feel the hurt
their pain, my pain
this is just too much rain,

but its all in the midst of the crowd. . . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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