Favouring British grammar and punctuation rules.
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The sun shyly peeked over the hill as the cold air made whispers audible and the dissipation began to rise from the dunes. The morning breeze stirred flurries of sand from dunes where shadows stubbornly clung to the face of the hill. A susurrus from the cops barely audible. Upon the bench in the lee of fickle dunes the old brass plaque gleamed in rays cresting the hill: an inscription of grief no longer audible. Ridged hill of letters, promises audible among dunes.
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