The Melody Forever Plays

The melody we thought forever plays ~ now haunts us both night and day

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2021 7:59:00 AM

I have to admit I have a few that reoccur at the most inopportune times

Judy Ball

Date: 12/12/2021 4:09:00 PM

There are melodies like that that you can't forget. Songs that bring back memories, some good and some you'd like to forget. Good stuff here Gershon. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 4:52:00 PM

Yes. Those kind of melodies are tinged with tears -- either of joy of pain. Season's best, Judy!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/12/2021 1:24:00 PM

And in how many instances in our lives does this apply - many unfortunately. Well said Gershon. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 4:51:00 PM

Yeah, some people have so many shattered romances, that they keep a device full of 'canceled melodies,' probably. Hope they don't run out of ROM. :) gw

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2021 3:56:00 AM

I've been there but couples, relationships, groups or organizations can work it out. I enjoyed reading this morn. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 4:47:00 PM

So, Sara! You must be a fan of the Beatles former hit, 'We Can Work it Out!' lol. Here's to comebacks, Gershon

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/11/2021 9:27:00 PM

Unfortunately, I believe that is true, gw. Yep, well-stated.