Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Rhyme

The Masterpiece

A masterpiece of creation woman is
With a treasure of feelings in her soul
Ready to give, to care, to love, to please
If a man, her heart, manage to console!



 © Demetrios Trifiatis
    07 SEPTEMBER 2014

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BE Bailey November 6, 2014 at 8:45 AM Absolutely love this one :) thank you for sharing this Demetrios. You described us so well. A job well done :))))) Hugs "B" Demetrios Trifiatis November 6, 2014 at 10:49 AM My dear B, thank you for your visit and comment. You say that I described you ladies very well, however, I believe that this is impossible for you ladies elude any description!

Paul Callus September 7, 2014 at 6:15 PM Indeed, Demi, a woman is all you describe and more. When a man has the right woman by his side he too becomes addicted to her lovely virtues; thus they balance each other and life flourishes. // paul Demetrios Trifiatis September 8, 2014 at 4:57 AM Paul, you are so right! Women are much more than what my four lines of this little poem describes! Yes, if we find the right one but the right one is found if we are the right ones. Don't you think? Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Robert Lindley September 7, 2014 at 3:50 PM Short, sweet and dead on the mark. That is why men seek out women , the need to have that in their lives! Bravo!!!!! Demetrios Trifiatis September 7, 2014 at 5:24 PM Thank you, Robert, for your kind words!

Maurice Yvonne September 7, 2014 at 1:48 PM A great tribute to women. Demetrios Trifiatis September 7, 2014 at 2:39 PM I think they deserve it, mon ami Maurice! Thank you!

Liam Mcdaid September 7, 2014 at 1:44 PM smiling sounds golden beautifully drawn image Demetrios Trifiatis September 7, 2014 at 2:40 PM Thank you, liam for your visit and lovely comment!