The Master Create Her

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Contest: Poems that paint a picture

9/13/2017

Gasping as she glimpses out of the 2D The majestic colors full and in 3D Beholding the markings of the Master hand Within the frame, expanding life in the land Ever all knowing the Painter understands As her thoughts develop lucidly aglow Gaining knowledge until she finally knows Star dusts molded for her mortal’s uniform In the shape and image of the Artist’s form By placing her in the Garden of Eden To blossom alongside the one called Adam In the realm of choice granting sin or freedom An unblemished plan, She and He let her go Nurturing from afar and watching her grow Updated 5/14/2019

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/25/2017 9:35:00 AM

An intriguing pen :) Enjoyed! xomo

G. Jay
Date: 10/25/2017 9:33:00 PM

Thanks Maureen.