The March of Us

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*Image of New Level of Morality by CharN. The March of Us A time that possesses my introspections, contributes a pastime, noting parents made donations, ~The March of Dime. That coinage seemingly flipped from then to now, new technology prime, trials social media vow ~The March of Time. Hollywood legends are noxious, paid, and made silver screen pantomime, chaos begets morals decayed, ~The March of Crime. Protect the innocence from the innocent, offbeat nursery rhyme, as to culture spiral descent, ~The March of I'm. The motivation for our rebelliousness, increased in our lifetime, reversal roles to righteousness ~The March We Climb. 2023 January 22 *RZ & HMS; following Constance format

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/23/2023 5:50:00 PM

Dear William, a clever, impressive and expressive poem. Each twist of the refrain is ingenious! Best wishes for a win and best wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/23/2023 7:24:00 PM

I embrace your extended courtesies, Susan, and your inviting words of support are spiritually uplifting with admiration, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2023 2:39:00 PM

a lot of truth in this, my friend. Good luck in this contest. it was a hard theme for me

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/23/2023 4:02:00 PM

I sorta went with this and will see where it goes, thanks Andrea, Aloha William

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 1/23/2023 3:16:00 AM

Very cleverly wrought! I 'specially like the "March of I'm!"

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/23/2023 7:28:00 PM

My heartfelt thanks, Elizabeth, for the wealth of your words and focus, Aloha William