The Mane of Fire

The stallion of fire, 
Leaves villages in ruin;
In a puff of smoke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hensley Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Great imagery here! I really like the The stallion of fire, Real firce!
Moreno Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Nice imagery in this one, I like the way the horse is setting ablaze everything he comes in contact with...Raul
Devonshire Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:57 PM
The title is provocative, Daniel. "Stallion of fire" is such a powerful and creative image. Tragic message, but brilliant work!
Wilson Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:30 PM
This is so sad when families lose everything they have. Well written Daniel. Leon
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