The Man Without a Face

The Man Without a Face  by JTCurtis


Darkness shadows your anticipation
As you pause to take this invitation
With weakness in your loins, you give the man your coins
To take you cross the river, to a place
Taken by a man without a face

Slowly, rowing, with each stroke of his paddle
Sinking fears, are something you must battle
With the coins now off your eyes, you have come to realize
That now,  you really haven't time to waste
You can see it in the man without a face

*
'Cause, time doesn't matter to you any more
Nor does pain, problems, obstacles or lies
Those things, you won't even find a trace
When you realize that you've fallen far from grace


Slowly drifting, your boat is getting nearer
From the mist, things are looking clearer 
There's really no surprise, as it appears before your eyes
It's by far to late for you to state your case
You see it as a man without a face

*
He walks from the boat leaving you behind
and places the paddle in your hands
As your troubled heart begins to race
You find, Your the man without a face

Soon you start, back a cross the river
Hoping praying, for a new soul from the Giver
It may take some time, for your sins to all unwind
And another soul to come and take your place
As you remain The Man without a face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 5:27 PM
Jerry, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
Selfa Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:56 AM
What an amazing work you've done Jerry! This deserves a thousand views!
Curtis Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Thank you Han---I wish the world felt like you do about this piece
Thompson Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:39 PM
This is a really good read, and I enjoyed it. You have a good talent for making me see the picture for what it is. Thank you for sharing your work :)
Curtis Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 6:07 AM
As always Thank You Jessica, your work has the same effect on me.
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Dear Jerry, In time we all come to make this journey with the ferryboat man on the River Styx. You describe it perfectly in this awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
Curtis Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Carolyn. It's true, you never know, that's why I always carry change. Lol
A   Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Well, Well, Jerry... This is deep, dark, and remains with an awesome ending twist. Enjoyed this kind of Dramatic existence, it sure paints a mask anew in an everyday way, however, this shadow seems to stay evil and snug. Thank you for offering a glance inside an empty spectrum. I am in love with this ink. Linda
Curtis Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 8:38 PM
but it didn't come out right, there are still many functions that I do not have, I have been telling the Soup, all they say is "they are working on it"
Curtis Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Sorry Linda, that comment was meant for someone else, but I edit it.
A   Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 8:29 AM
your comment on my comment makes no sense.
A   Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 8:25 AM
That is so lame, (it gets dull and boring) would you like me to remove my comment SIR.
Curtis Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Thank you very much Linda----I just glad, you didn't have to destroy me, Lol
Smith Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Wow Jerry. This is terrific. So full of imagery and meaning. One of your best.
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