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The Man With the Orange Cat

It was absurd to think that anyone would appreciate an Orange cat, Except of course, for Mr. Knock, "The Man in the Hat". Its admirable fur was golden and generous, Its disposition genial, yet kindly tenuous. Eyes so deep with iris green, The smallest iota could not pass unseen. Truly costly to anyone caught who had the knack, Making it irritable enough to kink over its back. The man was an engineer who emits great kindness, you see, Sharing the order of his flat with this unkempt "Tabby". They lived together without any strife, Sharing with each other, an excellent life. Written 7/3/16 in 45 minutes. For: Make a Poem Contest

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/13/2016 6:12:00 PM

This mad me think of Doctor Seuss. Congrats!

Dan Cwiak
Date: 7/18/2016 10:03:00 AM

Thanks, Richard. I was thinking about him when I came across the contest...so it was a natural progression.

Skat A

Date: 7/12/2016 11:39:00 PM

Dan, Congratulations on your nice win. Skat

Dan Cwiak
Date: 7/18/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thanks, SKAT. Long time - No write. It felt good to get into the flow again. I appreciate your comments.

Lu Loo

Date: 7/12/2016 5:34:00 PM

Dan, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Dan Cwiak
Date: 7/18/2016 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, Laura. I appreciate the read and your comments very much.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/12/2016 5:02:00 PM

great entry Dan with a sense of fun running through out congrts on 5th place hugs

Dan Cwiak
Date: 7/18/2016 10:09:00 AM

Thanks, Shadow. I wanted something on the light side, and was just reminding myself of DR. Seuss when I wrote it. Thanks for your comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/12/2016 4:52:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Dan:-) hugs jan xx

Dan Cwiak
Date: 7/18/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thanks again, Jan. I think next time I'll have to do Tommy the Train... I think I can...I think I can...I think...Oh You get it!!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2016 2:08:00 AM

You wove in the words quite brilliantly Dan good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Dan Cwiak
Date: 7/11/2016 2:05:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. I almost forgot "knock", but it was an easy fix. I am most appreciative of your comments, as always.