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The Majesty

Happy birthday wishes to Susan Lawrence today (29 Jan) - may your day be as beautiful and uplifting as your poetry and art. Above a plain a mountain rises  on it grows a forest green - within that wood there stands a pine  a talisman of growth unseen Upon its branch there grows a cone  inside that pinecone dwells a seed - within its womb a prophecy  of birth and life: a family tree Through glorious forest sails a wind,  an avatar of cleansing breath- dispersing smoke, transporting rain  to nourish life and stave off death On restless wind there soars a lark,  within its breast there dwells a song - a tune set free from gravity  a song of flight and liberty Above the wind ascends the sun,  its trek through space of lavish worth delivering on thermal wave  a warmth that warrants life on earth Warmed by the sun's rays lies a shore  with breakers polishing a shell - when held up to attentive ear  sounds like the sea - it calls to home And from the mountain's summit soars  an eagle, keen with sharpened eye -  sees all creation in its lays: so magical yet ordinary infinite yet temporary  the majesty of growth and birth of harmony throughout the earth:  of nourishment and unity,  of life and death and liberty,  of home and warmth and family. That eagle is the artist with a poet's far-reaching vision And she carries on her wings a message to heal mankind of all division

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Date: 4/1/2024 7:57:00 PM
A lovely tribute:)
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Date: 3/17/2024 4:06:00 PM
Visionary and visual images with much depth and philosophical insight. I always feel that depth and elegance comes from a sublime pen. Thanks for the wonderful one
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Date: 3/3/2024 4:39:00 AM
Dear John, This is a breathtaking ode to nature's beauty and the interconnectedness of life. Your words develop images of growth, harmony, and liberation, reminding us of the profound wonders surrounding us. Your tribute to Susan Lawrence is as heartfelt as your poetry, illuminating the warmth and kindness in your soul. May your words continue to inspire and uplift countless hearts. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/8/2024 12:41:00 PM
Dearest Friend, this poems soars, like the eagle, with majestic splendor and the "lavish" language of the poetic spirit soaring! The eagle is a perfect symbol! Are you going to put this to music? It would make a magnificent anthem! Only a month until spring training. Hope you are well. Happy Valentine's day of friendship to you R&R Bro. Blessings on eagle's wings to you!
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Date: 1/29/2024 1:12:00 PM
I love this so much dear John . I am humbled and honored that you have bestowed on me the gift of your beautiful words on my birthday. Thank you dear friend . Your words flow effortlessly from your pen and paint a vision both inside the soul and in the realms that surround. In gratitude to you for your friendship and kindness. Blessings and love always, Susan :) xx I love this in its entirety.
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John Watt
Date: 1/29/2024 8:23:00 PM
I'm so glad you got to see this on your birthday, dear friend. I have been a fan of yours and the themes you return to often in your beautiful creations: home, hope, love, unity, peace, tolerance, nature, nurture, family, understanding. Thank you for all you give. One more "happy birthday" before the day is over, and blessings always ~ John
Date: 1/29/2024 9:10:00 AM
a majestic poem, indeed, john! your imagery is very beautiful and the wording is exquisite. always a pleasure to read your work...
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John Watt
Date: 1/29/2024 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, dear Ilene. I am always honored by your visits and delightful affirmations. Hope you are keeping well ~ John
Date: 1/29/2024 3:57:00 AM
A beautiful birthday tribute to Susan. I hope she has a very happy birthday. Hope you're keeping well John. Tom
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John Watt
Date: 1/29/2024 8:14:00 PM
Thank you for passing along birthday wishes, my friend. Susan gives a lot of herself to poetry soup... it's nice to give back a little. All is well, hope the same for you ~ John.
Date: 1/29/2024 2:19:00 AM
A beautiful poem in tribute to Susan on her birthday John, what a gift. Happy Birthday Susan, Beryl
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John Watt
Date: 1/29/2024 8:12:00 PM
Belle, thanks for the visit and for the birthday wishes for Susan. She gives so much to this site. Blessings ~ John

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