The Magician

God open his hands                  
 light fell to earth in shards
 Of cherry blossoms

 God laughed like flowers
 Scattering petals of joy
 The eyes bloom rainbows

 God gave gifts of clouds
 As pillows for love to dream
 On white hibiscus.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/20/2009 11:53:00 AM
David, what marvelous Haikus you have written under the caption Magician. The aesthatics of your work is breathtaking. I love your comments on my Haiku Disguise. I respect you for that. -Mohammad
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:14:00 AM
YES!...multiple haiku. These are delightful, Dave. You are so talented. Love, daver
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:33:00 AM
I love this poem. Each Haiku stands alone, but also works togethr. Using the flowers that God created to describe him was genius. Keep writing. Thank you for your most welcomed comment on my poem. God Bless you. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/19/2009 6:27:00 AM
David, thtis is a wonderful poem in a Haiku form. Two thumbs up, Sir. Thank for your warm comment. Ernilando
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Date: 4/19/2009 2:32:00 AM
David this is my fav writing of yours... this haiku series is the best i have read ...oH i like the first .. the 2nd and the 3rd stanza!! beautiful my friend!! you are so talented ... well done! 'the eyes bloom rainbows' ... so did your words bring out the colours of joy and love for this wonderful God given nature! brilliant ~ Arany
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Date: 4/18/2009 3:23:00 PM
Wow. Beyond beautiful. Way beyond. Love, Shar
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