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The Magician

God open his hands light fell to earth in shards Of cherry blossoms God laughed like flowers Scattering petals of joy The eyes bloom rainbows God gave gifts of clouds As pillows for love to dream On white hibiscus.

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Mohammad Yamin

Date: 4/20/2009 11:53:00 AM

David, what marvelous Haikus you have written under the caption Magician. The aesthatics of your work is breathtaking. I love your comments on my Haiku Disguise. I respect you for that. -Mohammad

Daver Austin

Date: 4/20/2009 6:14:00 AM

YES!...multiple haiku. These are delightful, Dave. You are so talented. Love, daver

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/19/2009 11:33:00 AM

I love this poem. Each Haiku stands alone, but also works togethr. Using the flowers that God created to describe him was genius. Keep writing. Thank you for your most welcomed comment on my poem. God Bless you. Love, Dane

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/19/2009 6:27:00 AM

David, thtis is a wonderful poem in a Haiku form. Two thumbs up, Sir. Thank for your warm comment. Ernilando

Arany P.

Date: 4/19/2009 2:32:00 AM

David this is my fav writing of yours... this haiku series is the best i have read ...oH i like the first .. the 2nd and the 3rd stanza!! beautiful my friend!! you are so talented ... well done! 'the eyes bloom rainbows' ... so did your words bring out the colours of joy and love for this wonderful God given nature! brilliant ~ Arany

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/18/2009 3:23:00 PM

Wow. Beyond beautiful. Way beyond. Love, Shar