The Magical Forest

Walk along the leafy paths dappled with shade
turn over a rock or two and watch the scurrying
as little insects scatter looking for some covering
finding it underneath some sticks and a grass blade

Sit quietly and just listen to the song birds singing
with music and beauty they fill the forest glade
then walk down to the gurgling stream and wade
cooling feet in its crystal water with lots of splashing

Turn over the leaf of a fern and see the spores clinging
watch the leaves waving in the breeze as they are frayed
then some red deer fawns bucked, frolicked  and played 
not seeming to care who was there, jumping and springing

Squirrels chattering angrily as they  send nuts down in a cascade
bombarding all who pass by, they seem to lie, hidden and waiting
to catch unsuspecting walkers as they explore without disturbing
taking care to preserve  the wafts of bluebells and deadly nightshade

Wandering onwards seeing the silky cocoon of a future butterfly cacheted
and mushroom rings surround the tall trees mystical and captivating
some plain, many with multi-coloured spots  in sunshine glittering
old oak trees stand in splendour with leafs of emerald, turquoise and jade

Arriving at the banks of the lake surrounded by the forest glade
this place of mystery and tranquillity, no need of further searching
all one could ask for, spread out in glorious array that is so fitting
walking home I am content that into the magical forest today I strayed   

written 03/13/2014

contest: The Magical Forest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/2/2014 3:03:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem, once again, Shadow. Congratulations on your win, as well! :)
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Date: 3/31/2014 8:04:00 AM
Yay! congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/29/2014 1:16:00 PM
SHADOW, I love Roger's, super winning list.... Congratulations, on your win. I like The Magical Forest theme.... xox ~LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:04:00 AM
Hi Shadow, Enjoyable imagery. Congrats on your win. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 3/29/2014 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Shadow
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Date: 3/29/2014 5:59:00 AM
Enjoyable and creative write, congrats on the fine win, shadow
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Date: 3/25/2014 10:30:00 AM
I enjoyed another walk in your magical forest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/18/2014 11:09:00 PM
The images in my mind were so vivid as I read this, that I felt like I was there with you. A really beautiful write, Shadow! I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest!...Thank you for the wonderful comments. :)
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Date: 3/19/2014 6:14:00 PM
ty Kelly hugs
Date: 3/16/2014 3:46:00 PM
- My fairytale forest, Shadow - A beautiful poem. - I wish you good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2014 5:08:00 PM
ty Anne Lise hugs
Date: 3/14/2014 9:54:00 AM
All I can do is sigh. Beautiful.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/16/2014 6:06:00 AM
ty Rick that says it all hugs
Date: 3/13/2014 6:26:00 PM
Shadow; this is very beautiful. It must be beautifu to be in a magical forest. thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/16/2014 6:06:00 AM
the beauty and magic are there we just have to look Lucilla ty hugs
Date: 3/13/2014 6:05:00 PM
such a wonderful poem... SKAt
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/16/2014 6:04:00 AM
ty Skat hugs
Date: 3/12/2014 11:11:00 PM
You have transported me deep into this magical world here and described the forest with awesome skill! And you had some very wondrous rhyming going on here within this write! I really enjoyed reading this masterful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, you are good at these type of poems, Great Work!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/13/2014 11:27:00 AM
aw ty so much Russell much appreciated hugs
Date: 3/12/2014 7:53:00 PM
Beautiful imagery i really felt I was walking in the forest. Hope you do well in the contest. Jan
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Date: 3/12/2014 8:00:00 PM
ty very much Jan hugs
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