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Here you can find -Part 1-

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_magic_of_the_oak__part_1__collaboration_with_chris_green_919564

And -Part 2-

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_magic_of_the_oak__part_2__collaboration_with_chris_green_919831

 

Enjoy :)

The Magic of the Oak -Part 3- Collaboration With Chris Green

The Magic Of The Oak (Part 3 of 4)
A Green and White Production

My eyes, roaming free
Stared at that oak tree
How could a large room it conceal?
I saw a small road
and water, a boat
I'm dreaming, for that can't be real

I walked down the lane
It started to rain
As peppermints fell from the sky
In drops pink and white
No stranger a sight
I stuck out my tongue for a try

Behind me the stream,
a strawberry dream
pink fragrance, so creamy and sweet
The chocolate boat
stayed neatly afloat
with popsicle oars, what a treat!

I floated away
Not wanting to stay
But now wish that I had not gone
A picnic you see
Was set up for me
In front of that tree on the lawn

The elves sang a song
And I sang along
The boat brought me back really quick
It loved music, so
it went with the flow
jam-session with popsicle sticks

(To be continued...)

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July 13, 2017
Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Darlene De Beaulieu July 26, 2017 at 2:47 PM Hello Darren I also enjoyed this poetry.I am looking forward to reading more. Have agood my friend.

Kim Rodrigues July 16, 2017 at 9:16 PM These poems are a whimsical treat!!

Maria Williams July 16, 2017 at 12:40 AM Oh I would like to be at picnic, especially as I have a liking for Popsicle Sticks. Sounds a yummy read Darren and Chris, you've done it again pushing imaginations into the realm of make believe. Love it...Maria Darren White July 16, 2017 at 1:57 AM Heh yeah, happy you love our little fairy tale.

Joanna Daniel July 14, 2017 at 10:26 AM Wow, Darren and Chris, this sounds real yummy:) waiting eagerly for the final part:) Darren White July 14, 2017 at 11:33 AM Thanks Jo, am really happy you love our little tale :)

Joseph May July 13, 2017 at 4:38 PM a magical tale . beautifully done Darren and Chris Darren White July 14, 2017 at 2:05 AM Thanks Joseph, so glad you like it :)

Heidi Sands July 13, 2017 at 2:39 PM This is a so fun to read. Looking forward to more :) Darren White July 13, 2017 at 2:42 PM Thanks Heidi. It was fun to write also :)

Dean Wood July 13, 2017 at 1:07 PM Imaginative! And the imagery is great. Can't wait for part 4. - Dean Darren White July 13, 2017 at 2:19 PM Love it that you like our fairy tale so much :)

Lenna Walker July 13, 2017 at 11:39 AM I love all three parts, can't wait to see more :) Darren White July 13, 2017 at 12:18 PM One more, tomorrow. Glad you enjoy this, Lenna :)

Eve Roper July 13, 2017 at 11:32 AM Love this so much it is so musical sounding , Darren & Chris. Darren White July 13, 2017 at 12:16 PM Thank you so much, Eve :)

Tim Smith July 13, 2017 at 11:25 AM haha...I loved it...great imagination Darren White July 13, 2017 at 12:16 PM It's a blessing to have a boundless imagination :)