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Below you find the link to the first part of "The Magic Of The Oak"

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_magic_of_the_oak__part_1__collaboration_with_chris_green_919564

The Magic of the Oak -Part 2- Collaboration With Chris Green

The Magic Of The Oak (Part 2 of 4)
A Green and White Production


The table was set
And this you can bet
A meal that was fit for a king
They sat in their seats
All eyeing the treats
When one of them started to sing

A feast for the ear
I crept closer to hear
but hummed just a little too loud
That language unknown
Such seductive tone
They stopped and looked up, I ran out

I tripped on the mat
Fell on my face flat
They chuckled, I wished I could hide
Then helping me up
One gave me a cup
And said, “come, you’re welcome inside”

They gave me a chair
I didn't fit there
And sat on the stone floor instead
Then gobbled some soup
They all yelled: "Woop-woop"
And I ate a slice of rye bread

While looking around
Such magic was found
This place seemed to go on for miles
Enchanting indeed
My face I did feed
With food falling out of my smiles

(to be continued...)

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July 11, 2017
Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Kim Rodrigues July 16, 2017 at 9:14 PM A Green and White Production, indeed, and awesome!

Alexis Y. July 14, 2017 at 1:29 PM Hi Darren , you and Chris penned a good continuation of the first write. But I must say I'm hungry all of a sudden. Off to read part three:-) Alexis Darren White July 14, 2017 at 1:33 PM Thanks Alexis, it was great fun!

Joseph May July 13, 2017 at 4:36 PM With food falling out of my smiles"...love that line... Great job poets Darren White July 14, 2017 at 2:06 AM Isn't it wonderful? It's Chris' line and stanza :)

Dean Wood July 13, 2017 at 1:04 PM I've been looking for this! Lots of fun! Darren White July 13, 2017 at 2:18 PM Thanks Dean, so glad you like this :)

Lenna Walker July 13, 2017 at 11:36 AM TWO thumbs up for White and Green !!! Fun and whimsical read ! :) Darren White July 13, 2017 at 12:20 PM Thanks for the thumbs Lenna!

Joanna Daniel July 13, 2017 at 12:46 AM Ha ha, love this part too, White and Green, hope this fairy tale continues to be positive and magical:) you both collaborate so well:) Darren White July 13, 2017 at 12:20 PM Happy you love this so much Jo, we do too :)

Sara Ella July 12, 2017 at 8:05 PM This is fun! Read with a smile :D Great collaboration <3 Darren White July 12, 2017 at 11:43 PM Two more story parts to come, stay tuned! ;)

Tim Smith July 12, 2017 at 9:42 AM Kindness goes a long way...smile Darren White July 12, 2017 at 9:49 AM It does, and I smile :)

Heidi Sands July 12, 2017 at 9:27 AM An enjoyable collaboration. Well done to the both of you. I look forward to more. I laughed at the great line , food falling out of my smiles :) Darren White July 12, 2017 at 9:49 AM yeah, that's a great line, I agree (ssshhhh, Chris wrote it)

Probir Gupta July 12, 2017 at 7:24 AM Wonderful collaboration ... we too find magic and enjoy it ... Darren White July 12, 2017 at 8:48 AM I thank you so very much. Happy you like it :)

Maria Williams July 12, 2017 at 6:00 AM Oh good' alls well that ends well' I see 'With food falling out of your smiles', that is a good line. I'm glad to see that it was an enchanted type place that went on for miles. Extremely good Daren and Chris. Another great from the Green and White Productions...Looking forward to the next...Maria Darren White July 12, 2017 at 8:47 AM Tomorrow my friend, tomorrow :) I am happy your like our little colourful company.