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The Magic of Love

I scribble in the sand While you write a masterpiece My simple lyrics like a snack You are a chef and make a feast I fight to find a muse While yours are running out of space My aviator is blank Yours is your beautiful face I am Mars And you are Venus Nothing alike But nothing between us Opposites attract No one could understand How you could be my girl And I could be you man ..The magic of love My lines are very simple While you know every form On Soup I'm just a rookie You've been writing since you were born My taste is very narrow While your pallet is quite complex I'd never win a contest You're already on to the next I am Mars And you are Venus Nothing alike But nothing between us Opposites attract No one could understand How you could be my girl And I could be you man ..The magic of love You are salt And I am pepper Night and day But we go together Hand in hand Just you and me What we feel inside No one else can see I am Mars And you are Venus Nothing alike But nothing between us Opposites attract No one could understand How you could be my girl And I could be you man ..The magic of love ~Lyric Man Note: This is a write about two poets who found romance. Their life and writing styles have nothing in common but the two are inseparable.. yeah, that's the magic of love!

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Date: 8/28/2018 3:02:00 AM
wonderful!!! seems as if you have got strength when it comes to the love theme ....keep up, we're together
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:18:00 PM
Oh this makes me think about a couple who met on soup and now are married and another two friends who are now a couple..love is in the air :)..Or love is in the soup.. :)..Pls pass me the salt..I'll pass on the pepper..Spicy sweet :)
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Date: 7/11/2018 2:04:00 AM
Nice use of opposing images reminds me of the song 'The whole of the moon' by the water boys I like the cut of your cloth Tim
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Date: 6/27/2018 7:13:00 AM
Love is truly a magical place that we visit . I have come up with two lyrics that have got stuck in my head. "I didn't mean to steal your thunder, I didn't mean to put you under." any chance you can come up with a sequel to this.
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Date: 6/24/2018 2:48:00 PM
Lyric Man, thank you for the soul you breathe into this poem. I like the verisimilitude you project. Continue feeding us with this poetic nourishment. Big up! John
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:36:00 AM
A great story told in a well-written poem. I like reading your poems and admire your style. :)
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/21/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Susan.. I hope my style comes off as authentic. All my writes are based in truth. They're not all my truth. I could be writing about a friend or someone I know. What I hope that does is make my work incredibly believable and therefore relatable. Oops.. sorry for going on so much!
Date: 5/13/2018 2:54:00 AM
Beautiful! Love the idea of complementary couples.
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Lyric Man
Date: 5/13/2018 2:58:00 AM
Thank you Susan!

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