Gypsyof Essence Poet Rhyme

The Magic In Friends

Take my hand, as we walk this magic land.
Travelling together down the long road,
Full of gold, till we get old.

We will always have one another to hold,
Because we will not fold.
 Even when it gets cold.

These lives shared because we cared.
We were not scared.
Even when we did not dare,
to breathe in the cold air.

When I could not bare anymore,
You led me to the magic land by the hand.
Where we took a stand, 
not sure where we would land.

We could have been banned,
 for making this last stand.
But there is magic in this strange land, 
as we walk, hand in hand.

Gypsy of Essence

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Timothy Hicks March 18, 2013 at 10:03 AM I thought the ending was quite sweet... almost implying the reason for all the magic was simply because you had someone to imagine it with you. Also thanks for stopping to by read my stuff... it's much appreciated!

Cecilia Macfarlane March 12, 2013 at 10:15 AM Friends are worth more than gold, you captured the magic of friendship here....lovely! Hugs Gypsyof Essence March 13, 2013 at 4:40 AM I wrote this thinking of my best friend ;D thank you for stopping by

Ale A A February 26, 2013 at 4:02 AM It's always nice to have someone that walks beside you. I really like this poem. Gypsyof Essence March 13, 2013 at 4:38 AM Yes it is good to have someone to walk with, I am fortunate to have a lovely friend like this. thanks for stopping by :)

Vesna Kovrlija February 25, 2013 at 8:02 AM magic and so beautiful Gypsyof Essence March 13, 2013 at 4:36 AM thank you :D

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2013 at 5:19 PM this reads like a magic little fairy tale, Gypsy!! Nice to meet you here. Gypsyof Essence March 13, 2013 at 4:34 AM Nice to meet you as well. thanks :)

Justin Bordner February 22, 2013 at 1:31 PM A real smooth collaboration Gypsy - I enjoy the rhyme too - I've been searching for that magic mortal to inspire with for a long time - J.A.B. % Gypsyof Essence March 13, 2013 at 4:31 AM yes it was fun to write!! :)Thank you ;D

Debbie Guzzi February 22, 2013 at 1:12 PM Glad you have found the magic! Thank-you for stopping by my writes. Light & Love Gypsyof Essence March 13, 2013 at 4:26 AM Your poems were a delight to read, and Thank YOU for stopping by :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2013 at 2:30 AM This is a very well written poem Gypsy, I'm glad that I chose your poem today. - Bravo! - Have a beautiful day! - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Gypsyof Essence March 13, 2013 at 4:15 AM Thanks for stopping by to read this poem :D