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The Madness In Your Beauty

I once had met a girl And her smile made me nervous And when I saw her eyes twinkle It had made the stars imperfect I had showed her all my love But not a speck, had she returned it I'd never thought an angel Could do one dirty as a vermin I once had thought her pure But surely now she was a serpent And I realized at this moment That all beauty is a curtain When you peek inside the curtain, You see that beauty covers evil And sometimes the pretty faces Are on the ugliest of people

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Doug Vinson

Date: 3/26/2017 12:28:00 PM

That her eyes could make the stars imperfect - I love this. A simple yet oh-so-poetic thing; I hope you keep writing, writing like a wild man. : ) Yeah, sometimes an evil person is really good-looking, but I think it's extremly hard to truly hide all of it - there is a "hardness" to a pretty, evil person that's usually visible. Or am I just being foolishly romantic about this?

Deadd Accountt
Date: 3/27/2017 6:03:00 PM

No, you're right, I get what you're saying lol you can usually see some indication beforehand, most of the time.

Phil Capitano

Date: 3/22/2017 10:57:00 AM

Very cool and I agree with Mystic Rose. Well done.

Deadd Accountt
Date: 3/22/2017 4:35:00 PM

Thank you Phil!! :)

Darren White

Date: 3/21/2017 9:14:00 AM

You are wise.... I know so many people who just don't see that, who only base an opinion on the outside. There's a great cadence and rhythm to this poem I like.

Deadd Accountt
Date: 3/21/2017 6:18:00 PM

Very true Darren, and you are wise as well. Thanks for all the positive feedback man I really appreciate it!!!

Becca Teagan

Date: 3/19/2017 9:34:00 PM

This is very true. We (people) tend to put a lot of importance on outward appearance... but when we see what is inside, we see the true beauty or lack of beauty. Nice poem.

Deadd Accountt
Date: 3/19/2017 10:21:00 PM

Yes very true, someone can be beautiful inside and but not out or vise versa, etc. Thank you!!

Cc Browning

Date: 3/19/2017 9:24:00 PM

Very true. You have to read the book not just the cover.

Deadd Accountt
Date: 3/19/2017 10:19:00 PM

Precisely ;)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 3/19/2017 12:56:00 AM

THIS IS NICE. WELL PENNED..............//HUGS

Deadd Accountt
Date: 3/19/2017 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, kind sir - OP Threat