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The Madness In Your Beauty

I once had met a girl 
And her smile made me nervous
And when I saw her eyes twinkle
It had made the stars imperfect 

I had showed her all my love 
But not a speck, had she returned it
I'd never thought an angel 
Could do one dirty as a vermin

I once had thought her pure 
But surely now she was a serpent 
And I realized at this moment 
That all beauty is a curtain 

When you peek inside the curtain, 
You see that beauty covers evil 
And sometimes the pretty faces 
Are on the ugliest of people

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Doug Vinson Date: 3/26/2017 12:28:00 PM That her eyes could make the stars imperfect - I love this. A simple yet oh-so-poetic thing; I hope you keep writing, writing like a wild man. : ) Yeah, sometimes an evil person is really good-looking, but I think it's extremly hard to truly hide all of it - there is a "hardness" to a pretty, evil person that's usually visible. Or am I just being foolishly romantic about this? Login to Reply Deadd Accountt Date: 3/27/2017 6:03:00 PM No, you're right, I get what you're saying lol you can usually see some indication beforehand, most of the time.

Phil Capitano Date: 3/22/2017 10:57:00 AM Very cool and I agree with Mystic Rose. Well done. Login to Reply Deadd Accountt Date: 3/22/2017 4:35:00 PM Thank you Phil!! :)

Darren White Date: 3/21/2017 9:14:00 AM You are wise.... I know so many people who just don't see that, who only base an opinion on the outside. There's a great cadence and rhythm to this poem I like. Login to Reply Deadd Accountt Date: 3/21/2017 6:18:00 PM Very true Darren, and you are wise as well. Thanks for all the positive feedback man I really appreciate it!!!

Becca Teagan Date: 3/19/2017 9:34:00 PM This is very true. We (people) tend to put a lot of importance on outward appearance... but when we see what is inside, we see the true beauty or lack of beauty. Nice poem. Login to Reply Deadd Accountt Date: 3/19/2017 10:21:00 PM Yes very true, someone can be beautiful inside and but not out or vise versa, etc. Thank you!!

Cc Browning Date: 3/19/2017 9:24:00 PM Very true. You have to read the book not just the cover. Login to Reply Deadd Accountt Date: 3/19/2017 10:19:00 PM Precisely ;)

Manmath Dalei Date: 3/19/2017 12:56:00 AM THIS IS NICE. WELL PENNED..............//HUGS Login to Reply Deadd Accountt Date: 3/19/2017 7:58:00 PM Thank you, kind sir - OP Threat