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The Mad Dance

The klaxon sounds and off we do scurry
Up to the gun house we head in a hurry

Through narrow p-ways and up noisy stairs
We pass each other with far away glares

What threat to meet, all do wonder
We’re well trained and there’ll be no blunder

Hatches closed and scuttles secured
Drive motors humming, we speak not a word

Ammo to the hoist, battle dress in place
Flash hoods cover all but our face

“Mt 51 manned and ready!”
Gas eject air pressure is holding steady

“Air action port!” our circuits align
Gun slews, the target to find

“On target aircraft!” the checksight declares
Our peril confirmed, no drill, all just a deep inhale

“Right and left guns load!” first powder then shot
To the mad dance, cast we all our lot

Guns loaded, we track knowing not when
Waiting the salvo alarm, the dance soon to begin

Fourteen men poised, ready for the show
Bound to each other, not for their own glory they do go

Gong! Gong! Fire! The first stanza a roar
Then rapid and continuous we feed each bore

“Bore clear!” signals to load the next round
As hot-case men pitch spent brass to the ground

Practiced harmony, each motion robotic
Load!, Ram!, Fire!, Eject! the cadence hypnotic

Smoke and flareback, gases choking
Onward we whirl, and curse the foe attacking

“Foul bore left gun!”
A stuck case has us undone

Pry bar in hand, the Gunner appears
The extractors are broken, confirming worst fears

Casing removed and the gun finally clear
Up all night we’ll be, fixing this gear

“Cease fire!” all safely emerge
Realize we now, our fears to purge

Destruction averted, another hour to draw breath
Till the enemy returns, seeking our death

“Police up that brass and swab out those barrels!”
The chief keeps us all intent on the peril

They will come again, or we will seek them out
So little rest we take, while the issue is in doubt

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This describes a live shoot from the prospective of 
the men manning a twin 5 inch gun aboard a destroyer.
These ships were common in our Navy from 1944 through 
about 1980. The "old salts" out there will find this very familiar. 
This is a spinoff from my "Tin Can Sailors" write even though 
the ships in that story were single mounts. Same gun, but 
with just one barrel. Those were before my time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/16/2016 2:32:00 PM
Steve,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Steve Harris
Date: 6/16/2016 10:29:00 PM
It was the best time of my life! The noise, smoke and danger was very exciting for me as a young man. I was in the Navy for 20 years and went on to maintain and operate more modern and automated guns, but these were the best! I tried to capture that here. So glad you like it - thanks!

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