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image of Granddad's portable Remington typewriter

poem submitted to "The Marvelous Thingamajig" poetry contest, Daniel Henry Rodgers, sponsor 5/23/2026

 

THE MACHINE THAT WAITED FOR ME-dhr

It sat there—not as metal, not as memory,  
but as something half-asleep and listening.  

A quiet creature of keys and shadows,  
its body dulled by dust, its spirit still humming  
beneath the years.  

It had known the weight of a man  
who believed words could bend the world~  
a man whose hands were rough with labor  
yet gentle with letters, as if each keystroke  
were a small salvation.  

I remember the music of it~  
that click-clack cadence like rain on a tin roof,  
like a heartbeat learning to speak.  

I was a child then, cross-legged under his desk,  
catching the syllables like fireflies, 
not knowing they were seeds, not knowing they were mine.  

When Granddad passed, I carried the machine upward  
as though escorting a relic to its resting place~  
a silent procession through the narrow throat of the attic.  

It waited there—through summers that smelt of cedar and heat,  
through winters that whispered of things forgotten, it waited~  
a sentinel of stories I was too afraid to write.  

Years later, the attic groaned under my return,  
as if recognizing the footsteps of someone 
who had once believed in beginnings.  

The machine was still there, its silhouette steady,  
its longing patient.  It had survived because some things endure  
even when we abandon them~  
faith, memory, and the quiet insistence of a dream  
we pretend we outgrew.  

When I touched it, the dust rose like breath.  
The first key resisted-a refusal, 
a reminder of all the years I’d resisted myself.  

But then, a single letter, dark and certain,  
punched through the page like a pulse returning.  

By the third paragraph, I understood:  
I had not resurrected the machine. It had resurrected me.  

And somewhere between the rafters and the rising words,  
I realized this truth: I was never the one writing the story.  
I was the story finally finding its way back to the page.

The accompanying memoir vignette can be read at poetrysoup.com/short_stories/a_dream_deferred_13827
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Swan Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 4:44 AM
Lovely poem Sara! I adore the story. My Grandfather's typewriter has a place in my memory with similar affection. We were allowed to 'have a go' as children. But now the plastic tick-tack of a keyboard does not have the gravitas of a large metal typewriter, as you watch the letters on the long arms reach across to land on the page. I would make too many typos for it though... and so much harder to keep re-editing. fave for me too.
Murphy Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 12:27 PM
The end of the poem kind of reminded me of the ending in the movie Twisters. I love that movie. I also love this poem. Both very reflective. Congrats!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 6:08 AM
Congrats and also on, “ OLD ATTIC PRIZE FOR BEST NOSTALGIC POEM.” … When I touched it, the dust rose like breath. The first key resisted-a refusal…love the description of the typewriter waiting!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 11:36 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win.............
Hind Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 8:29 PM
very much thought put into this, great write, enjoyed <3
Goldsmith Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 3:13 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. What a great picture you have here. The computer is faster but the old typewriter was great. Guess the kids today could Not work them. "Good Luck"  I did, "My Dad's Journaling Pen-DHR." Have a lovely weekend writing away............
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 7:28 AM
Amazing. Added to my FAVE's.
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