The Lunatic's Circle

Everything goes round and round 
No one seems to have a frown
The Lunatic is going down
to the moving, lighted town
 
The Lunatic is now retired 
His thoughts are oh so tired
Mary, no one seems to find her
Engulfed in a sea of fur 
The Loony leaves the earth 
 
His conscious is receding
In life, he’s found the meaning 
He tells them “Please don’t leave me!”
(He) Feels like he is weeping
 
The Lunatic writes in his head 
The tip is out of lead
Everyone screams and shouts 
It all simply restarts 
 
It all calms down
Everything goes around
Everyone’s cheery, but The Dreary 
He sits alone, calls her on the phone
 
“Help! The walls are breathing
No one seems to hear me.”
“Do you see what I see?
On the floor above me.”
 
It all falls down
Gets turned around
Now he has a frown
Goodbye, lighted town
 
As it’s getting cold,
He’s growing old
His thoughts are coming back
Building on the stack
 
He stands above the track
Passing where he’s been before
He’s lost in his thoughts
Ones that never seem to stop.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 29, 2016 at 11:43 PM
nice to see this one again. linda
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January 15, 2015 at 11:37 PM
Luke, thank you for the reply...PD
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January 17, 2015 at 6:39 AM
Is this an automated response? Because I asked you multiple questions and all you said was thank you for replying...
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January 11, 2015 at 10:29 PM
LUKE:) :) :) I smile at every entry in this contest.. Congratulations, on your #1 placement. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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January 12, 2015 at 6:04 AM
Does number 1 placement mean I entered first or that I won?
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January 11, 2015 at 4:37 AM
Amazing expressions, congrats on the win, Luke
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January 10, 2015 at 10:53 PM
Luke, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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January 11, 2015 at 4:00 PM
Can you explain how that works? thanks
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January 10, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations, Luke on an excellent wittily written winning piece! Best wishes. Pandita
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December 26, 2014 at 5:20 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup, Luke :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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December 25, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Luke, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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