The Ludicrous Love

Have u ever been in love? 
                   makes u vulnerable, like the kites above.
open ur chest and opens up ur heart, 
                   allowing to mess up, in ways absurd.


U build up all defenses, 
                  u build up  a suit of armor, 
To no use it is, 
                  it creeps like a burgular.


The stupid u, the stupid one
                     wanders into ur stupid world, 
And u give them a piece of u, 
                     for which they never asked.

And  then one day something
                      stupid happens, 
A kiss, a touch, a smile, 
                       renders u hapless.


And then ur life is 
              not yours anymore, 
confusion, dillema, sleeplessness
                           outpour.

And  then she sends
           'may be we should b friends'
leaves u sulking, bemoaning'
              and everything ends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mascarenhas Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 10:21 PM
nicely written amit, the first experience of love at a tender age. Good Work. Cheers Oscar
Sweetheart Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 3:21 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 5:09 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amit. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 2:47 AM
Very sad poem. but well penned
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