The Loving Time

Excuse me now it's the Loving Time,
"Meows and purrs" while I write my rhymes.
Little nibble on my toe, just so I'll know, you're there.
Scratch on my ankle, hey! I know you care!
"Meeeooowwww" again by my foot, 
so I stopped to have a look....
And melted at how cute you are there!

So excuse me my friends...
In the middle of my pen, a little ball of fur cries.
Whiskers are tickling, her tail is switching
and her nibbles beg kibbles from my eyes.
I must stop and Love this precious,
little ball of fur with her purring message.

I'll return to you soon to complete my rhyme,
Just after I give my full attention
and now most certainly my mention,
of the duty I fulfill, when it's the Loving Time.



:) I'm in training...
http://13cattails.blogspot.com/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/25/2009 4:34:00 AM
The animal lover deserves a rap time and a play time too ... your perceptions are so different and so inviting ... I love them
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Date: 5/23/2009 11:13:00 AM
Awesome Poetry.! your skills are over powering and can change a perception in just one sentence -Reality
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Date: 5/21/2009 5:30:00 PM
"Meeeooowwww" again by my foot, so I stopped to have a look...." .... i really love that line alot. maybe because im so use to going through that every day. lol
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Date: 5/21/2009 2:43:00 PM
Hi Izzy Perfecto hun! I have two cats, they're so precious to me. So relaxing their purrs and needing all the pets they can get. Your poem tickles my fancy!! This is so precious cause it's written straight from your beautiful heart. Truly enjoyed! Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 5/21/2009 12:58:00 PM
Aww, so precious. I have two kitties and they are constantly craving attention and competing with the dog! This is so sweet and full of love. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/21/2009 10:46:00 AM
Those fur balls are captivating, Izzy. I'm so glad they adopt us! So many times I have done exactly what you describe -- everything takes second place to my feline friends. When they want attention, they sit on my lap and stare right into my face so I can't think of anything but them. Great poem! (One for my faves) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:53:00 AM
Love the love in this piece..love the opening line..this is well done and shows your fondness.
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