The Lover's Dream

I dreamed you disappeared down shore's long curve,
dipped, abandoned prints, the jealous waves
smoothed by manic curl and rushed away,
reminder of the straightness of your stride,

I dropped a hand to bar the zealous tide,
then woke to glimpse your flower'd dress go by;

blue and velvet pearl, the curtain'd sun
flashed like tears that fall into a well, 
from the window of a house imprisoned by, 
a sandy path where love, each day denied,

finds in the folds of sleep, a place to hide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Thomas Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 4:23 AM
A feast of imaginative, original phrasing. The excellent rhyming further adds to the enjoyment. I especially like the concluding line.
Warlov Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 9:35 PM
It's one of those that seemed imported from elsewhere (like "kubla Khan" by Samuel Taylor Coolidge); began running in my head and had to grab pencil and paper quickly and never changed a word. Thanks much! [ https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/43991/kubla-khan ]
Warlov Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:36 AM
Youthfully ________ inspired by Edgar ___ Allen Poe. Can't you tell?
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