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The Love We Make

We lay in bed, begin to kiss, his hands, run all over me, piece by piece, articles of clotheing come off, until its just our nakes bodys pressed together, he slowly spreads my legs, and slides himself into me, our bodys move as one, as we begin to make love, the thrusting, the humping, is magical, the way we move together is so natural, is so perfect, to feel him, slide in and out of me, getting harder, going depper, filling me with his cum, making us both moan, in total pleasure, our bodys relax, and lay beside one antoher, in our bed, feling our warmth, we hold eachother tightly, and fall asleep, in eachothers arms, after a kiss, just like it all began

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/12/2009 7:00:00 AM
This one was good. Next time try to describe other things as well. Don't get me wrong it was good it just jumped in to the Love making way to fast. I know James Frasher writes good ones for an example I also write Love poetry But I am not sure if its good or not. But I loved this one. Keep writing!
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