The Love We Had

We were the ones who stood up and out
The love we had was powerful
You were the one to say I love you
The love we had was supposed to be forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 12/3/2008 8:24:00 AM
This poem went straight to my heart! Very good. Thank you for writing it.
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Date: 11/15/2008 5:55:00 PM
very true. we always think its going to last forever dont we. been there
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Date: 11/15/2008 3:22:00 PM
hey u
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Date: 11/15/2008 1:57:00 PM
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Date: 11/14/2008 4:40:00 PM
Don't have the foggiest what your comment is about, but, yes, I am a man and I'm 80 years old, been married 57 years, with a son who is probably older than you are. Love, daver
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Date: 11/14/2008 4:29:00 PM
Hi Alexz, short but powerful, very good poem I wished I were 19-that was so great of you to ask. Fritz Purdum
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Date: 11/14/2008 10:13:00 AM
yeah, khys
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Date: 11/14/2008 10:01:00 AM
Hi Alexz, You know I've spoken with you often but still don't know if you are male or female. You have a gentleness in your writing that says female, yet a number of your issues I've dealt with in males. Of the cutters I've talked to, possibly 150, 148 have been female. So please forgive me if I said young man as one of the male cutters was named Alex. But the advice stands. You be you. Nobody can be you better. God Bless you. Vince
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Date: 11/14/2008 8:10:00 AM
how many times have i heard that. forever is with God and so many years away if you live that long. studie and get your home work done and i'm sure forever will find you. jhl
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Date: 11/14/2008 7:15:00 AM
Short and strong.... Isn't that they way love feels sometimes...Nice poem
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