The Love Song

I am sitting by the window
Singing a love song to the moon
I am praying somewhere out there
My soul mate will hear the tune.

She will know I send my heart 
With my loving melody
and hidden in each note
She'll find a little piece of me .

She must know that I'm not a millionaire
but I have so much to give 
and I can promise I will love her
For as long as we will live .

I can promise to be faithful
One woman and one man 
My kisses carry true love
and speak of all I am .

When this life is over 
and we go to the promised land 
God will grant us love eternal
We'll walk forever hand in hand .

The man in the moon is smiling 
I can tell from his happy grin
My message has been given 
my search for my soul mate can begin,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jubenville Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 2:10 PM
It's not easy to find true love, but everything is possible with the God above.... Lovely poem, congratulation... xoxo ...Ellie
Halliday Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Very nice poem. Nice spiritual tone to it. I noted particularly the 5th stanza's content, suggesting God's permitting you to go on forever with your loved one. I know of ONLY one Christian church that has that concept in their doctrine. Are you LDS/Mormon?
Poshiwa Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 4:40 AM
What a lovely poem this is. A journey that may not be easy but with the guidance of God, trust nothing will ever go wrong. Beautiful.....
Watson Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Thank you Herzel God will grant love everlasting , I'm sure of that but he'll demand that we earn it .
Dunn Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Dear fellow souper you have the true heart of a romantic poet, loved this poem so very much it is romance with just a touch of elegance. I'm looking forward to reading many more of your works sir. cheri also thank you for your in comment of my historical work. cheri
Watson Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 12:40 AM
Behave with the sir thing . My name is Darren or Daz to my friends . I thank you for your comments and my comment on your historical piece , You earned and I was delighted to give .
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January 29, 2014 at 3:31 AM
- Darren, a really beautiful poem !!! - soft and romantic - You write "individual" as I like, easy to understand your thoughts and words. - Glad I visited your site today :) - Thank you for visiting my poem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Watson Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Thanks for the kind comments . I came to this site to experiment and find the style that suits me . My favourite poem of all time is sonnet 116. So who knows where the road ahead will lead . I thoroughly enjoyed my visit to your page and like all nosey neighbours . I will be back for more .
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