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The Love of Who?

I Move Through The Shadows Of The Night Because You Leave Me Feeling Like Your Shining Knight Dont Let My Hand Go For It Will Be My Last Show For Lifes Turns Have Churned Me This Way I Have So Many Words I Feel To Say But You Leave Me To Ingest Them I Wish To Tell You, But When?

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Skat A

Date: 1/28/2016 11:00:00 AM

AWESOME POEM..............SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2013 11:49:00 AM

Akshar... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Have fun and take care during the new seasons Holidays.. Always <3 =LINDA

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/12/2008 8:59:00 AM

This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of Who Loves? is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph