The Love Between Sun and Moon

the sun was drowned into the blue embrace of the ocean 
Everyday she was invited to the clouds fancy dancing banquet , wearing her golden dress 
A piece of charming cloud was spinning around her spinning body 
And she sneaked out everyday 
No one knew where she hid
And today , the breeze found her behind the orange flames kissing the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 11:43 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Blodgett Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Metaphoric painting that is a beautiful understanding of true nature. Lovely Lonna
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 7:12 PM
I enjoyed your poem very much Aigin. Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement! Aloha, Connie
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