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The Love Between Sun and Moon

the sun was drowned into the blue embrace of the ocean Everyday she was invited to the clouds fancy dancing banquet , wearing her golden dress A piece of charming cloud was spinning around her spinning body And she sneaked out everyday No one knew where she hid And today , the breeze found her behind the orange flames kissing the moon

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Date: 10/13/2024 11:43:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/26/2020 8:53:00 PM
Metaphoric painting that is a beautiful understanding of true nature. Lovely Lonna
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Date: 1/19/2020 7:12:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem very much Aigin. Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement! Aloha, Connie
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