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The Loudest Gun

A thunderous gun Lightening falls down silent One loud shot deafens

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/27/2013 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Date: 2/26/2013 4:30:00 PM
great imagery ,Melani. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:21:00 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Menlani luv xx
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:32:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:00:00 PM
Melani, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2013 7:57:00 PM
Melani! I appreciated this strong entry in my latest poetry contest---I could envision the lightening AND hear the sound simultaneously! Strong effects, poetess! :) gwendolen
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