The Loudest Gun

A thunderous gun
Lightening falls down silent
One loud shot deafens
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:30 PM
great imagery ,Melani. Congrats on your win.
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Menlani luv xx
Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 9:32 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love
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February 25, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Melani, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
Song Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Melani! I appreciated this strong entry in my latest poetry contest---I could envision the lightening AND hear the sound simultaneously! Strong effects, poetess! :) gwendolen
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