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The Lost Soul

There is a lost soul,that hides deep within me, it struggles and is wanting to just be set free. If it could only find the courage and strength to come out and play, God only knows just what it would say. The lost soul within truly has a big heart, it wants to beg for forgiveness,but hasn't a clue where to start. Everyday is a battle and it wonders should I stop trying, It has so many bad thoughts, and spends alot of time crying. Why can't this lost soul just break free from it's shell, it wants nothing more than to escape from this HELL. Colleen Marie Bono

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/7/2013 9:56:00 AM
Colleen, i hope you sneak on your sisters computer... hehehe... congrats with your little win...LINDA
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Date: 7/6/2013 5:20:00 PM
Hi Colleen, So difficult to understand some emotions. Thank you for sharing and hope you find the peace you deserve. Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/5/2013 3:50:00 PM
This is so sad. I don't know when you wrote this, but I hope that lost soul is not lost anymore. Congrats on your win, Colleen! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/5/2013 2:09:00 PM
Colleen congratulations on your fine win. Your poem conveys a deep confused and trapped soul. Set it free and live to your heart's content. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/5/2013 7:08:00 AM
You are on a roll Colleen, another win, Congratulations!
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:50:00 PM
Coleen, I congratulate you on this win.... And I hope you are not being tortured by remembrances that God has long since forgotten...Love you dearly.... Jake
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Date: 7/4/2013 9:25:00 AM
way to go! you got a great number five poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/4/2013 5:00:00 AM
The lost soul has been found...The lost has been found and reciscovered in this lovely poem...Congrats - Tim
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Date: 7/3/2013 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations, COLLEEN :-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT
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Date: 3/27/2010 1:08:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Collen.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/17/2009 9:44:00 PM
Oh my how I can relate... Thank ou for reminding me yet again that I am not the only one that suffers from time to time. The Southern Belle
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:19:00 PM
congrats on the win in the contest!!
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Date: 11/30/2009 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations, well done, Lovely poem. Pam
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:11:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! Colleen .. u did it.. u won Small Cage Big Bird honorable mention in the contest with this wonderful poem of yours... u are coming out of your shell now girl so don't give up.. u have found your home here on the Soup.. bravo to Colleen and her comeback to life... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/25/2009 5:36:00 PM
I like it. You turn your pain into beauty with these words. Its touching
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Date: 10/18/2009 11:25:00 AM
God is the key. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/18/2009 10:12:00 AM
Great insight Colleen. Many Souls are lost in the wilderness of self that the mind as created as their lives. Thankfully our pass over(Christ) has also been sacrifices for reconcellation to help the soul find it's way back to it's heart. Thanks for sharing this awesome write. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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