The Lost Heart

Had I but thought more

     Of your love and what it meant

     You would still be here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Perfectly said....too often we don't know what we have, until we've lost it. Well done, Daniel! :) Good luck!
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August 13, 2010 at 1:32 PM
I feel like this so often, Daniel. But as you told me today, we can only move forward using what we have learned from the past. Wonderful senryu! Love, Carolyn
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