The Loom of Life

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For my recently departed wife of 52 years

The Loom of Life
By Franklin Price
01/23/2022

I can feel your presence near me
As I move from room to room
Further threads of life I'm weaving
On our still shared marriage loom

It's a lonely place without you
Though I see you all around
From the pictures hanging on the walls
To the plants within the ground

From the china in the cabinet
To the rugs upon the floor
Your touch exists here everywhere
You're still in my heart, and more

You're the one who made our house a home
A place of comfort in our life
Not even in a million years
Could I have found a better wife

From your window there in Heaven
Don't look down on me and cry
Memories of you make me happy
We'll be together by and by

Until then, I'll keep on weaving 
For our family, friends and heirs
Weeping sometimes 'cause I miss you
 I'm your husband who still cares

When I no longer work the loom
I'll meet you in the promised land
I'll love you 'til forever 
The wedding band's still on my hand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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