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The Long Year

It really made things hard Living across the courtyard And seeing you here and there But it was a melancholy treat To feel so incomplete A lonely, sweet, aching, blur So one year I waited In serene synergy with time Wrote fire, rhyme, and song I want to thank you for calling And restoring the gnawing And making the year so long ** Thanks for reading... Anton - www.foesofprose.com **

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/20/2009 9:22:00 PM
Sounds like a difficult situation. I liked the line "a lonely, sweet, aching blur
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Date: 6/18/2009 10:42:00 AM
a true verse of longing! Light & Love
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