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The Long Road To Ruin

Take not the road of ruin that is long Walk on the gold and rivers of the Nile With every breath praise life into your song For darkness weeps and often comes along Resting with wolves to greet you by the mile Take not the road of ruin that is long Simmer with senn and sage some soothe of strong The weak divide their frown before they smile With every breath praise life into your song For life is but a path of right and wrong Where we court life and death along the aisle Take not the road of ruin that is long Listen and learn and lay concrete lifelong While taking steps tender upon the tile With every breath praise life into your song Become beauty and bliss where you belong As errors tempt the trail you take by trial Take not the road of ruin that is long With every breath praise life into your song First Person Villanelle L Milton Hankins 08-04-2022

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Date: 8/4/2022 10:13:00 AM
Beautiful and meaningful poem, well written indeed, enjoyed
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Johnny Sumler
Date: 8/4/2022 10:57:00 AM
Rarely get a chance to be on the Soup but was thankful to come across your villanelle while writing mine. Didn't know they have a V contest. Good luck on your beautiful V

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