The Lonesome Pine

On the edge of our garden stands a lonesome Pine,
Gnarled and twisted, an ugly beauty, hard to define.
Older than the age or so I am led to believe,
Planted generations ago, why, I cannot conceive.
It has branches long dead with pine cones long died,
Huge branches, green with life,where birds flit and fly.
At an impossible angle, it stands out of the cliff face,
A huge prop of steel is needed to keep it in place.
I had some huge lower branches lopped off to ensure,
That it stands there majestic for many years more. 

© Dave Timperley 1st May 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/2/2016 11:13:00 AM
Dave, some of us have a lonesome pine on our property. I have to admit I would feel guilty cutting it down, especially if it is showing some life. It might look ugly and a bit snarly, but it deserves a chance to live. ~Sonia
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Date: 5/2/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Sonia. I wouldn't dream of cutting our Pine down for 1 it deserves to win it's struggle and 2 it is illegal to cut any trees down here in Cyprus without a specific court order, which is very hard to obtain. God Bless. D.
Date: 5/2/2016 8:36:00 AM
Hi Dave, Ur pine tree is old & gold. U penned well here. Truly a wonderful creation. Enjoyed..........hugs
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Date: 5/2/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Manmath. God Bless. D.
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