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The Lonely Old Man

The lonely old man wrinkled he's aged, he's gone into care he feels like he's caged. Weak he's fragile but his mind is in tact, the way life is it's a matter of fact. The lonely old man he's missing his wife, waiting to die looking back o his life Looking through photographs a distant memory it seems, frightened by death it's plaguing his dreams. The lonely old man it seems nobody cares, in his bedroom he sits there and stares. One day a young lady comes to help him get ready, on his feet he's not stable he's become unsteady. The lonely old man he's feeling a tired old chap, the lady dresses him smartly finishing with his cap. Out in the gardens she takes him for a walk, from his wheelchair he laughs as they talk. The lonely old man and the lady they bond, watching the fish as they swim in the pond. Days go by the man weakens he's worse, the lady stays with him that's her promise as a nurse. The lonely old man ready to leave his life, he starts seeing the face of his beautiful wife. Holding his hand she knows he is dying, trying to be professional she can't stop herself crying. The lonely old man turns to the lady, his face has darkened his eyes grey and shady. Slipping away his breathing is slow knowing it's time for him he must go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/21/2014 7:28:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Samantha :) - I choose your first moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/20/2014 12:46:00 PM
Samantha,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2014 6:39:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Samantha. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/19/2014 3:37:00 PM
Ohh Noo!! this is a poem that cuts deep because of the sadness it creates and the great skill you used here, Welcome to PS Samantha, I believe you will have a wonderful experience here as we enjoy all your poetic art and heart, You are now part of a great family that i believe will be a great blessing... Hope to follow up all your work ..Your new PS friend RRC
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Date: 6/19/2014 2:08:00 PM
Samantha,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/19/2014 1:44:00 PM
Such a heartfelt poem..So sad yet beautifully crafted.
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