The Locked Room Ii

Everyone knows where the key is….
Yes, the key to open the door that separates
vile darkness from ordinary darkness,
when the lights are out. 

No one wants to open the door.
No one is brave enough to open up a history
that ought to be undisturbed,
in its pristine state.

The exorcists have blessed water,
that they intend to sprinkle on the room’s walls,
which once was sprinkled with blood,
akin to a slaughterhouse. The room smelled
of blood, death and violence.

Whenever they get close,
the walls groan,
as though they are alive. Disturbing mist
envelops their feet, as whispers
ooze out.

The room seems to insist
it wants to be locked….forever!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 1:51 PM
A spooky write. Teddy! Congrats! Blessings!
Kimathi Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Thanks so much Kim, for your warm applause!! *^_^* Blessings to you too!!
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August 6, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Teddy :) Congrats on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Little Me - Guess Who" and celebrate your win. Forever and Ever **SKAT**
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August 6, 2016 at 3:39 AM
Thank you so much Skat, for starting my weekend with good news!! *^_^* <3 Have a lovely weekend!! ;-)
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