The Littlest Elf

Time was running out, Christmas Eve was drawing nigh.
The elves had worked day and night since early in July!
To meet Santa's toy-making schedule there must be no slack,
To ensure there were lots of goodies for Santa's toy sack!

Elfie was a mischievous but hard-working little spritel
He was the littlest elf of all, alas, this added to his plight!
It seemed that the harder he worked and try as he might,
The hapless little fellow just could not do anything right!

For example, he put Jills in boxes labled 'Jacks in the Box',
And placed chirping chickadees in all the cuckoo clocks!
As he daydreamed he painted the fire trucks aquamarine,
And put wheels and wings on every toy submarine!

Talking dolls counted cadence, "Hup, two, three, four";
Toy soldiers cried, "I want my mama!" as they marched to war!
He placed Lincoln Logs in boxes labeled 'Tinker Toys'!
Oh! What a Christmas 'twould be for little girls and boys!

Santa mused, "It seems that every job I put him on he mars;
So I'll put him to work pulling levers making Christmas stars!"
He did so well Santa said, "Won't you come along with me,
And place a brilliant star atop every child's Christmas Tree?"

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Date: 12/21/2023 9:45:00 AM
Such a delightful, magical read dear Bob. So captivating with the little elf’s mishaps. Bless him! A perfect festive read to enjoy and put a glowing smile on everyone’s faces. So glad I’ve read this treat today. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful Christmas and peaceful, healthy new year. Blessings to you.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/21/2023 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Christina - glad you enjoyed. A Merry Christmas and Blessed New Year to you and your family. Best to you as you coninue your poetical journey - Bob H
Date: 12/9/2023 10:52:00 AM
Very charming Christmas poem, Robert. The flowing cadence of the rhyme is quite musical. Yuletide blessings to you, fellow veteran. ~
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/9/2023 11:08:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, for your kind and encouraging comments. A Merry Yultide season to you and yours! Bob H
Date: 12/9/2023 7:18:00 AM
Definitely a poem to make one smile:) A most enjoyable read, Bob. Merry Christmas!
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/9/2023 11:07:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel - glad it brought a smile! A Merry Christmas to you and your family - Bob H
Date: 12/8/2023 10:43:00 PM
A beautiful Christmas story Bob with perfect rhyming, it just rolls off the tongue. Hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas. Tom
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/9/2023 6:51:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. Hope you are feeling better. A Merry Olde Christmas to you and your Family - Bob H
Date: 12/8/2023 7:11:00 PM
A wonderful Christmas tale my friend. There is a right fit for everyone.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 12/9/2023 6:50:00 AM
Thanks, Jerry. Merry Christmas to you and yours - Bob H
Date: 12/8/2023 3:05:00 PM
This is quite perfect. In every way, Bob.. a wonderfully, created storyline, and it made me laugh at the elf. The ending was really perfect. …. A joy to read my friend. Pangie xxxx
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Date: 12/9/2023 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie. So thoughtful of you to take time to comment - Merry Christmas to you and your family - Bob
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