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The Little Red Fire Truck Ride

Jingle, jingle... jingle 
As we emptied our piggy-banks 
Hoping we saved up twenty five cents 
Every Saturday afternoon, we would excitedly wait
Twelve O'clock sharp the bells would ring 
Screen doors flew open when we heard them
The kids in the neighborhood...
Immediately stopped doing whatever they were doing 
Whether the boys were flipping baseball cards or shooting marbles 
Or the girls were playing Hop-Scotch or dressing Barbie dolls
We all ran to the corner of Craig street at noon
"All Aboard" yelled the fire chief 
"Drop your quarters in the box and have a seat 
Don't worry folks, this old jalopy runs well" 
He was referring to the little red fire truck
It was rebuilt and custom made just for children to ride in 
We cruised the back streets with our hands held high; screaming 
'round every bend...we laughed
Tails wagged as dog's chased behind 
Putt, putt... putt 
"Ride over children, exist to the rear... 
See you next weekend" the fire chief yelled


The Old Jalopy Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Craig Cornish 
7-22-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cornish Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Great story and memories Charlie and a fun write. The type that makes youth special
Gauthier Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 9:36 PM
Such joy shining through. Lovely, Charles. Congrats on your win.
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Thank you, Line :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:17 PM
This is sweet, Charles! Lots of fun. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:07 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Mcgee Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Can I get on board next Saturday? Love it. Congrats on your win.
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Sure you can Jeanne...be there at noon (lol) Thank you so much!
Canerdy Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:42 PM
Charles, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Janice. :)
Proxenos Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 2:14 PM
What a lovely poem and a wonderful memory that goes with it which you so poetically and perfectly Charles. My type of poetry. Hugs, Jennifer.
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:09 AM
Thank you for your kind words Jennifer.. Hugs always :)
Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Exceptional poetry my friend. A fav..
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Thank you Robert...much appreciated
Cunningham Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Lovely childhood memories, love the US fire trucks, ours are like a big box and called fire engines. That said if my house was on fire I'd welcome any shape lol. Tom
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Thank you Tom. Yes, I would welcome any size or shape too. Charlie
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