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Jingle, jingle... jingle As we emptied our piggy-banks Hoping we saved up twenty five cents Every Saturday afternoon, we would excitedly wait Twelve O'clock sharp the bells would ring Screen doors flew open when we heard them The kids in the neighborhood... Immediately stopped doing whatever they were doing Whether the boys were flipping baseball cards or shooting marbles Or the girls were playing Hop-Scotch or dressing Barbie dolls We all ran to the corner of Craig street at noon "All Aboard" yelled the fire chief "Drop your quarters in the box and have a seat Don't worry folks, this old jalopy runs well" He was referring to the little red fire truck It was rebuilt and custom made just for children to ride in We cruised the back streets with our hands held high; screaming 'round every bend...we laughed Tails wagged as dog's chased behind Putt, putt... putt "Ride over children, exist to the rear... See you next weekend" the fire chief yelled The Old Jalopy Poetry Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish 7-22-2019

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Date: 7/28/2019 12:41:00 PM
Great story and memories Charlie and a fun write. The type that makes youth special
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Date: 7/27/2019 9:36:00 PM
Such joy shining through. Lovely, Charles. Congrats on your win.
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Line :)
Date: 7/27/2019 6:17:00 PM
This is sweet, Charles! Lots of fun. Congratulations!
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2019 7:07:00 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 7/27/2019 3:47:00 PM
Can I get on board next Saturday? Love it. Congrats on your win.
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2019 7:08:00 AM
Sure you can Jeanne...be there at noon (lol) Thank you so much!
Date: 7/27/2019 3:42:00 PM
Charles, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2019 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. :)
Date: 7/27/2019 2:14:00 PM
What a lovely poem and a wonderful memory that goes with it which you so poetically and perfectly Charles. My type of poetry. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2019 7:09:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Jennifer.. Hugs always :)
Date: 7/23/2019 10:40:00 AM
Exceptional poetry my friend. A fav..
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2019 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Robert...much appreciated
Date: 7/23/2019 4:31:00 AM
Lovely childhood memories, love the US fire trucks, ours are like a big box and called fire engines. That said if my house was on fire I'd welcome any shape lol. Tom
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Charles Messina
Date: 7/28/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Yes, I would welcome any size or shape too. Charlie

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