The Little House

The little house stood all alone
down by the shady brook
and it seemed a happy place
to those who stopped to look.

No one could have seen
the house it couldn't tell
so how could anyone have known
that things weren't going well.

The house had once been happy
with a family made of three
a mother, father and a son
had filled the house with glee. 

But as time marched along
the father passed away
the mother boarded up the house
and took the child away. 

For many months the house
sat there all alone
no more to hear the family play
the house was not a home.

The empty halls would echo
the air was cold with frost
no one knew the memories 
the little house had lost.

Alone and so forgotten 
the little house would sigh
and pray for someone else to come
in hopes that they would buy.

Then one day it happened
a family made of three
moved into the little house
and set its spirit free.

*The first poem I ever wrote*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bush Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 4:38 PM
You know, I wrote a poem The Gallows when I was 13. Would you care to take a peek & tell me what you think?
Wolves Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 6:01 PM
sure
Bush Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 11:32 PM
Very well done for a first. Even houses weep alone.
Wolves Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 3:36 AM
Thank you kindly
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 3:12 PM
wow, Robert. your very first??? It was excellent for your very first one!!
Wolves Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 4:32 PM
yes that was my very first poem written back in the 1980's thank you so very much
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 10:11 PM
There is something absolutely lovely about a first poem, and this one rises to the occasion, my friend.
Wolves Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Thank you very much appreciated
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