Olusegun Arowolo Poet Senryu

The Lips

they open like
cave from the hill with steamy fumes...
teeth exposed

speech pours out
with vibrating intensity...
truth is better

paired not joined...
beautify face and attract love
with soothing kiss



Olusegun Arowolo    Date:07-22-2012

Contest:"Lips" sponsored by Carol Brown

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2012 at 11:19 AM Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Olusegun. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2012 at 3:49 PM This is really cool, I love how you chose senryu to describe lips. Congrats on the well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick July 26, 2012 at 1:56 PM Very creative work..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara

David Williams July 25, 2012 at 4:02 AM Olusegun super congrats on your win, excellent write...David

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 25, 2012 at 12:39 AM Congrats , friend, enjoyed the poem:) Jag

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2012 at 9:16 PM congrats olusegun on a super sweet write and win for the lips challenge.. this is wonderful luv..

Debbie Guzzi July 24, 2012 at 5:27 PM Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi July 22, 2012 at 2:37 PM Best to list these as senryu the contest [I believe will take any form] vivid imagery! Light & Love