The lily flower
* .............. *
/|\ It was fresh and lively . . . /|\
** a yellow petal so bloomy . . .
But . . .
*** for only that morning...
/|\ it wilted and fell off . . . /|\
** brown and so brittle . . .
And . . .
*** the lily plant was dull...
**
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