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The lily flower

* .............. * /|\ It was fresh and lively . . . /|\ ** a yellow petal so bloomy . . . But . . . *** for only that morning... /|\ it wilted and fell off . . . /|\ ** brown and so brittle . . . And . . . *** the lily plant was dull... **

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Date: 7/18/2025 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/16/2025 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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