The Lilies Gave Me Nightmares

My Lover’s heartfelt tithing setting by my bedside looms.
For his comment undermining, gave a gift of Lily blooms,
but the bouquet ever blossoms off intoxicating fumes
and the blunder of my Lover unbeknownst becomes my doom….
What augurs well, perchance foretell! The Lilies shroud my tomb?

So drifting off through slumber soft my summer sloth descends
into the blue, the muddled hue before the black begins
and dreams supreme replaced by screams as Nightmare settles in.
For if I die before I wake, eternity to spend!
I pray my Love, my Soul, to take the lilies back again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/18/2014 1:13:00 PM
You funny...and this is too cool. With a name like, "The lilies gave me nightmares", I knew it would be!....Caleb
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Date: 2/14/2014 10:57:00 PM
Here goes, may we do well.
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Date: 2/5/2014 3:37:00 PM
Fantastic. You know of my desire to Tweet links to those I enjoy? I would like to add this to that list.
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Sophia Valentina
Date: 2/10/2014 3:14:00 PM
That would be awesome! Thank you Scott!
Date: 2/3/2014 8:34:00 AM
Very Nice Poem! Enjoyed it much…Thanks for sharing//Sinclair
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Date: 2/2/2014 11:15:00 PM
:) and you told me I was good...look at you, far better than me.
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Sophia Valentina
Date: 2/3/2014 8:20:00 AM
Oh Arnold, we both know your ability to write the way you do in English as your second language is complete genius! I'd love to read some Romanian poetry.
Date: 2/1/2014 12:15:00 PM
This should have tipped me off immediately. Again, I was livid I could not bash it, but you know I know genius when I see it, even if I don't acknowledge it. I hope you are writing more; you always have been the best and my better, for the keenness of womanly intuition trumps the masculine crudeness every time.
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Sophia Valentina
Date: 2/1/2014 12:26:00 PM
Much appreciated. Word games with you have always been the best.
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