"the Lighthouse Way"

The Lighthouse shines bright
for my ship can follow you
through fog and envy..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:58 PM
love the light... and envy...pd
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 8:21 PM
Interesting one, Michael. Is it the envy of others that you must follow thru? Love when you post haiku. LUv, Andrea
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August 28, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Strong and exciting Michael... u are very astute in Haiku form now.. another book of Haiku's too? one never knows wht the future will hold..luv..
A   Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 3:57 PM
WOW! She must be great and hard to follow, Michale hope this ship of yours speeds up- hope it is worth it.. Loved your poems..wow! the more I read the more I am seeing things here..LOL, I mean no disrespects by that. I am sure her ship wants you to follow. Michale, I am a true fan of yours and a certain women poet and I am reading both your and her wonderful poetry. Keep up the flowing of following. Loved your Haiku,..LeeAnn
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August 28, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Awesome write Michael, hope you are having a great Saturday, luv Wilma
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August 28, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Excellent metaphorical use of the lighthouse, Michael. Enjoyed the message in your creative haiku! Love, Carolyn
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