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"the Lighthouse Way"

The Lighthouse shines bright for my ship can follow you through fog and envy..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:58:00 PM

love the light... and envy...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2010 8:21:00 PM

Interesting one, Michael. Is it the envy of others that you must follow thru? Love when you post haiku. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2010 5:20:00 PM

Strong and exciting Michael... u are very astute in Haiku form now.. another book of Haiku's too? one never knows wht the future will hold..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2010 3:57:00 PM

WOW! She must be great and hard to follow, Michale hope this ship of yours speeds up- hope it is worth it.. Loved your poems..wow! the more I read the more I am seeing things here..LOL, I mean no disrespects by that. I am sure her ship wants you to follow. Michale, I am a true fan of yours and a certain women poet and I am reading both your and her wonderful poetry. Keep up the flowing of following. Loved your Haiku,..LeeAnn

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/28/2010 8:56:00 AM

Awesome write Michael, hope you are having a great Saturday, luv Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/28/2010 8:24:00 AM

Excellent metaphorical use of the lighthouse, Michael. Enjoyed the message in your creative haiku! Love, Carolyn