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The Lighthouse

T-tuff to climb h-hills e-encounter L-long path i-isolated g-grounded h-high t-tranquil h-huge climb o-ocean view u-upper house s-surrounded by water e-engroussed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/9/2017 4:15:00 PM
Read a few of your poems today, this one is telling me its time for a beach trip. Thanks.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2017 6:03:00 PM
G. Jay I hope you have fun at the beach.I like the lighthouses I am attracted to them. Each one has its own beauty. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 8/10/2017 11:49:00 AM
Darlene your words portray a clear image of what I saw in Maine when I visited the Portland Lighthouse. Your Acrostic poem reminds me of that beautiful lighthouse.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2017 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Micheal this lighthouse I have seen was beautiful. i am attracted to the lighthouses. It is a lighthouse one cannot forget. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 8/9/2017 11:03:00 AM
Your Acrostic poem towers up like a lighthouse above the rocky base, Darlene. Short, crisp lines which give a clear image of your theme. Regards // paul
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you Paul,I have seen a lighthouse like this one. I was in Awa,when I saw it. I am always drawn to lighthouses. They are beautiful. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 8/8/2017 9:32:00 PM
. Creative and well penned my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2017 7:43:00 AM
Hello Holly good morning. thank you my friend. have a nice day.
Date: 8/8/2017 10:45:00 AM
Well done! I can see all you describe in my mind's eye.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2017 3:28:00 PM
Hello Alfred,I love the lighthouses hey are beautiful. i am always drawn to them no matter where i see them. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 8/8/2017 10:18:00 AM
Unusual use of short lines, I like it Darlene...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2017 3:32:00 PM
Hello Charlie, thank you. I have always liked the lighthouses. they are beautiful. I had a chance to be inside one when i went to Nova Scotia. It was beautiful inside. i stiil remember it. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 8/7/2017 9:09:00 PM
interesting !
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2017 10:06:00 AM
Yes it is interesting Lighthouse have always been interesting to me. I like them all shapes. They are beautiful. have a good day my new friend.
Date: 8/7/2017 9:08:00 PM
"tuff to climb" sounds Caribbean ...."an encounter" with whom or what? It's so interesting..I enjoyed it...Bonswe Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2017 10:07:00 AM
Yes it is a a tuff climb to the lighthouse but it is worth it when you get there. Have a nice day my friend.

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