Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

The Lighthouse

Waves around impinging ferociously
the seashore fiercely anticipating  
To settle personal retribution
in darkened murderous circumstances.
Night's  sincere sentinel exhibiting
the water’s shallowness environments
to water vehicles incessantly
to avert dangerous situations.



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September 22, 2014
Form: Rhopalic Verse
Dr.Ram Mehta
Third Place Win
Contest:The Lighthouse by nette onclaud

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Carrie Richards September 29, 2014 at 3:17 PM Wow......you really did a great piece with this difficult form ! Well done, Dr. Ram!

Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2014 at 7:55 AM Nicely done Dr. Ram.

Nette Onclaud September 29, 2014 at 7:25 AM solid write dr.ram... my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans September 28, 2014 at 6:37 PM Congratulations Dr. Mehta. You did a marvelous job on your winning poem.

Joseph May September 28, 2014 at 1:59 PM Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Maurice Yvonne September 28, 2014 at 12:15 PM Congratulations Dr. Mehta on your well deserved win.

Jan Allison September 28, 2014 at 6:29 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2014 at 12:17 AM gosh< I still have not even studied this form out and I might not make the deadline, but good for you. you did it!!

Maurice Yvonne September 23, 2014 at 8:28 AM What an excellent write using a very difficult form. I hope this places high in the contest.

Harry Horsman September 23, 2014 at 5:02 AM your poetry light shines brightly......

Jan Allison September 22, 2014 at 11:18 AM excellent write Dr Mehta good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx