The Life We Want

passive
meekly living
willingly giving up
our chance to create and live out
our dream



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on February 15, 2020 for contest MODERN OR TRADITIONAL CINQUAIN sponsored by WILLIAM KEKAULA  -  RANKED 1ST
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Somadas Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 11:10 PM
Wonderful write Line.. Great win..
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line, perfect poem. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 6:43 PM
well penned Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Roy Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 10:11 PM
Very well penned. God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Thank you, Pratap. Much appreciated.
One Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Nice one..
Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Thanks, SO.
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