The Life of Mature Minds

The life of mature minds
is aid to all silly clowns
adorn life and silently binds
and blooms each face and efface each frown.

The bluster of emotions, floods down
the mind and sheer delight glistens
on lips, and insipid nature drown
in delight, and to each incertitude silently listens

The drops of blushed desire with tinge
of fantasy and wild ecstasy drops
from minds abroad and bring
the sole being some consolation and passively props.

The restlessness of the soul 
and uneasy hidden fears
and slow down incertitude rests all
and dim blur eyes literally tears.

The unreasoned thoughts perplexes and retards
and swarthy leaden eyes fails
the brimmed tear eye silently guards
but full emotioned, to visage dribblingly sails.

The mortal gazes at psyche as an urchin
with wild surmise and feel puzzled
to things unknown and admire with chin
up, full gape wide and blank eyes dazzled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ponce Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 2:52 AM
Hello, Akash! This is my first time to read your work and I must say that I'm astonished. Keep up the great work!
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May 12, 2014 at 2:56 AM
thanks for appreciation @jake
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May 6, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Akash
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May 12, 2014 at 2:57 AM
thank u dr. ram for ur appreciation.....
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January 4, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Akash, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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January 5, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Hello SKAT thanks for ur compliments, I appreciate what you said, and yes I would love to be your sweet poet friend. :-)
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January 4, 2014 at 11:51 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Asash ! - A very nice poem !! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 5, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Hello Anne, feels good when some one appreciate your poetry, appreciation is fuel to a poet so that he can keep burning and lighting the world, THANKS :-) and ya wishing you a best new year 2014... may you soar
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January 4, 2014 at 8:33 AM
Akash, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 4, 2014 at 8:44 AM
sure dear lady
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