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The Life of a Land Lover

The journey of perilous seas-
a vessel so grand-
plunging into the darkest abyss-
eagerly searching as the house upon a rock-

Steering true through mutinies,
teetering on the brink of tipping!

Rallying, never to waver again!

Yet another voyage just dawning-forevermore!

Copyright © Luis Martinez-Rivera | Year Posted 2012

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Bukang Liwayway Date: 8/15/2012 11:33:00 PM nice poem..thanks for sharing.... **Mary** Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/10/2012 5:43:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem Week" contest Luis. Love, Carol Login to Reply Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 8/15/2012 11:15:00 PM Thank You :D

David Williams Date: 8/5/2012 11:39:00 AM Luis congrats on your win, love it...David Login to Reply Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 8/15/2012 11:15:00 PM Glad you like it :)

Lee Ramage Date: 8/5/2012 11:29:00 AM Well done. Lee Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/5/2012 7:56:00 AM Congratulations on your win Luis, well done xx Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/5/2012 7:05:00 AM congrats on your win Luis...nicely done Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/4/2012 8:04:00 PM Luis ;-) congratulations with your awesome poem of the week. Thanks for the contest support. LUV~ PD Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 7/31/2012 12:15:00 PM Nice portrait of a sea going ship. Two typos - In the second line in should be vessel and in the next to last line - waver instead of waiver. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply Luis Martinez-Rivera Date: 7/31/2012 12:18:00 PM Thank you I wrote that on my Android so the auto correct messed me up.

Joseph May Date: 7/31/2012 9:51:00 AM nicely penned Luis..thanks for stopping by ....and good luck in the contest....Joseph Login to Reply