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The Life of a Land Lover

The journey of perilous seas- a vessel so grand- plunging into the darkest abyss- eagerly searching as the house upon a rock- Steering true through mutinies, teetering on the brink of tipping! Rallying, never to waver again! Yet another voyage just dawning-forevermore!

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Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/15/2012 11:33:00 PM

nice poem..thanks for sharing.... **Mary**

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem Week" contest Luis. Love, Carol

Luis Martinez-Rivera
Date: 8/15/2012 11:15:00 PM

Thank You :D

David Williams

Date: 8/5/2012 11:39:00 AM

Luis congrats on your win, love it...David

Luis Martinez-Rivera
Date: 8/15/2012 11:15:00 PM

Glad you like it :)

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/5/2012 11:29:00 AM

Well done. Lee

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/5/2012 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Luis, well done xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/5/2012 7:05:00 AM

congrats on your win Luis...nicely done

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2012 8:04:00 PM

Luis ;-) congratulations with your awesome poem of the week. Thanks for the contest support. LUV~ PD

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/31/2012 12:15:00 PM

Nice portrait of a sea going ship. Two typos - In the second line in should be vessel and in the next to last line - waver instead of waiver. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Luis Martinez-Rivera
Date: 7/31/2012 12:18:00 PM

Thank you I wrote that on my Android so the auto correct messed me up.

Joseph May

Date: 7/31/2012 9:51:00 AM

nicely penned Luis..thanks for stopping by ....and good luck in the contest....Joseph