Luis Martinez-Rivera Poet Acrostic

The Life of a Land Lover

The journey of perilous seas-
a vessel so grand-
plunging into the darkest abyss-
eagerly searching as the house upon a rock-

Steering true through mutinies,
teetering on the brink of tipping!

Rallying, never to waver again!

Yet another voyage just dawning-forevermore!

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Bukang Liwayway August 15, 2012 at 11:33 PM nice poem..thanks for sharing.... **Mary**

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 5:43 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem Week" contest Luis. Love, Carol Luis Martinez-Rivera August 15, 2012 at 11:15 PM Thank You :D

David Williams August 5, 2012 at 11:39 AM Luis congrats on your win, love it...David Luis Martinez-Rivera August 15, 2012 at 11:15 PM Glad you like it :)

Lee Ramage August 5, 2012 at 11:29 AM Well done. Lee

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 5, 2012 at 7:56 AM Congratulations on your win Luis, well done xx

Joseph May August 5, 2012 at 7:05 AM congrats on your win Luis...nicely done

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2012 at 8:04 PM Luis ;-) congratulations with your awesome poem of the week. Thanks for the contest support. LUV~ PD

Matthew Anish July 31, 2012 at 12:15 PM Nice portrait of a sea going ship. Two typos - In the second line in should be vessel and in the next to last line - waver instead of waiver. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Luis Martinez-Rivera July 31, 2012 at 12:18 PM Thank you I wrote that on my Android so the auto correct messed me up.

Joseph May July 31, 2012 at 9:51 AM nicely penned Luis..thanks for stopping by ....and good luck in the contest....Joseph